we have been learning about this picture
here is an example
One stormy night there was this girl her name was Tiara she was just walking then she slipped on this stick until she was going to get up. She reached her arms out to get up but then she felt this thing so she thought it was a stick the then she looked up and saw this big egg but she didn’t go to it yet because her Knees were bleeding but she had to get up because all of the birds were behind her trying to peek her then she grabbed the egg and rand to hide. Until a bird spotted her she got into a ball and rolled. Screaming she got up and started running. Running her heart started pumping for help. She found a log. She slid into the log. The egg started shaking. Until it hatched there was slime all over her hand but she didn’t care but the dinosaur was making so much noise so she said:”shhhhhhhhh!
” but the crows heard her so the crows started pecking the log so then Tiara said to the dinosaur “ we are going to get caught but you run and i will distract them ok!” so then they got out and started running but the hungry thirsty crows flew to her and tried getting her but they missed. She started running and hid in this spiky bush. It was so spiky that she had to move all of the spiky parts then all of the crows went back to the dinosaur until Tiara yelled out”stop!” and all of the crows stopped and looked at her and said “look i'm over here come get me not the dinosaur just leave the dinosaur alone if you want the dinosaur you're gonna have to chase me first come on let’s go for a fly and me a run!” so then all of the crows start flying towards Tiara but they can’t get her because she was to fast but then the crows started getting angry so they went super fast until she looked back and saw the crows coming straight for her so she ducked but they kept flying so then Tiara went back to the dinosaur and saw the dinosaur sad. So then Tiara decided to go back to the crows and yelled and said “stop chasing us i know that you guys are thirsty for blood but there are some berries on that tree that have nice juice in them just leave us alone!” so then all of them made their crow noise. Tiara was happy so she ran back to the dinosaur and when she got there the dinosaur had disappeared so she kept looking around her to see if she could see him but the dinosaur was nowhere to be found. Tiara thought she would leave it because when it would grow up it would be a scary eating dinosaur so she just headed home.
Hi Tiara, what an awesome story. You gave so much detail that I felt like I was there! It reminded me of one of my favourite books called A Series Of Unfortunate Events (which is a TV show too) where a village is full of crows. Will there be a part 2? Maybe you could try to remove the big empty spaces on your blog post. You can do this by clicking preview before you post.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tiara. Your writing is full of suspense and description and I enjoyed reading it. I wonder what will happen to that dinosaur?
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