Hi,Today I will be doing a blog post about me.We read a story called mop head and it was a girl who had Afro type of hair and everyday at school her friends and everybody else would tease her and say all these types of mean things about her so here is my finished work on all about me.Do you have feedback on my work.
Kia ora Tiara. Thank you for sharing and for explaining your work. I wonder how many people are named after characters from movies? I like the way you've used arrows to make it easy for me to know what to read next. Maybe you could use a different colour text or background because black on dark blue is a bit tricky to read. Keep up the awesome blogging!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your feedback Phil and next time I will try and make a different background to make my writting look a little better
DeleteHi there Tiara I really like your post because the background and how you used the arrows so it can be easy for people like me to read.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
BYE BESTIE!
Hi there Tiara I like how you explained your work you did and for sharing it with us. Keep up the Great Work. I will see you in our next zoom
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Seralia
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